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| Peer review
Complete your peer review exercise below, providing as much constructive criticism as possible. The more detailed suggestions you provide, the more useful it will be to your classmate. Make sure you consider each of the following aspects: LeadGuiding questions:
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- Whose work are you reviewing?
Odia2028
- Link to draft you’re reviewing
- User:Odia2028/Microaggression
- Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
- Microaggression
Evaluate the drafted changes
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Lead
There are no suggested edits to the lead, but I think that what is already on the page is well-rounded! Just be sure that any major changes that you make are included once you are done.
Content
On the intersectionality section, it might be helpful to add a short description of how the examples demonstrate distinct experiences that occur as a result of each relevant group membership (how the trophy wife example is not experienced by Asian men or white women, etc). You have found such great empirical studies to include in all sections; they really help demonstrate some of the under-explained claims that were already made.
Tone and Balance
The claims that you added are grounded nicely in the journal articles and studies that you have found, which make them well-balanced. Your writing is not biased in any way, but I do think that it would help someone who may be skeptical of microaggressions be convinced of their existence and prevalence.
Sources and Resources
Your sources all come from reputable authors, who also come from diverse backgrounds. They are all current and rely on other academic sources to make their claims (meta-analyses are always great!).
Organization
Your contributions are very academic and well-written, but also easily understandable for readers that may be unfamiliar with these topics.


