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| Peer review
Complete your peer review exercise below, providing as much constructive criticism as possible. The more detailed suggestions you provide, the more useful it will be to your classmate. Make sure you consider each of the following aspects: LeadGuiding questions:
ContentGuiding questions:
Tone and BalanceGuiding questions:
Sources and ReferencesGuiding questions:
OrganizationGuiding questions:
Images and MediaGuiding questions: If your peer added images or media
For New Articles OnlyIf the draft you’re reviewing is for a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.
Overall impressionsGuiding questions:
Examples of good feedbackA good article evaluation can take a number of forms. The most essential things are to clearly identify the biggest shortcomings, and provide specific guidance on how the article can be improved. Additional ResourcesCheck out the Editing Wikipedia PDF for general editing tips and suggestions. |
- Whose work are you reviewing?
Mwbullock
- Link to draft you’re reviewing
- User:Profesorapos/Laida Memba Ikuga/Outline
- Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
No Sandbox Draft, Only an Outline
Evaluate the drafted changes
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After going through the outline of this person, from what I can see and review I think you have a lot of good sources and information that you are trying to pull. I like where your thoughts are as far as organization in your outline. It seems your person has a lot of different publicity and more attention, so I think pulling those different aspects will serve the page well. I think that the sources and division of accolades will be valuable to readers in understanding her journey. You meet the source requirements and seem to have a good understanding of each one as far as how it relates to her life and story. I think something I would be cautious about is including something that has lower significance and less information. Since you want to dive into various aspects of her life, maybe going broader could be better, just to ensure ample coverage of each section. I don’t know if you have media decided yet but just calling attention to her or her work with that media will serve a key purpose in a visual aid for readers. Overall, I believe you have a good start at identifying her key accomplishments and work that will be purposeful in discussion.


