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<span class=”wikied-assignment” style=”font-size:85%;”>— Assignment last updated by [[User:Savannasundance|Savannasundance]] ([[User talk:Savannasundance|talk]]) 15:05, 23 September 2025 (UTC)</span> |
<span class=”wikied-assignment” style=”font-size:85%;”>— Assignment last updated by [[User:Savannasundance|Savannasundance]] ([[User talk:Savannasundance|talk]]) 15:05, 23 September 2025 (UTC)</span> |
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:Hi @[[User:Savannasundance|Savannasundance]], @[[User:Schoolproj25|Schoolproj25]], @[[User:A.sivakumar48|A.sivakumar48]], thanks for anything you can do to help- in particular evolving the article towards more of a narrative sythnesis would be most welcome, as suggested above. – [[User:Yadsalohcin|Yadsalohcin]] ([[User talk:Yadsalohcin|talk]]) 00:13, 24 September 2025 (UTC) |
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I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Thanks for creating this article, which is similar to, but distinct from, the set of body positivity, fat acceptance movement, lookism and body shaming. It is concisely written. Given it’s short length, it perhaps has an overly heavily reliance on quotes; a narrative sythnesis is generally preffered. There might in the future be scope for consolidating some of the overlapping topics in this field, perhaps at body image for example.
Klbrain (talk) 10:41, 5 September 2025 (UTC)
— Assignment last updated by Savannasundance (talk) 15:05, 23 September 2025 (UTC)
- Hi @Savannasundance, @Schoolproj25, @A.sivakumar48, thanks for anything you can do to help- in particular evolving the article towards more of a narrative sythnesis would be most welcome, as suggested above. – Yadsalohcin (talk) 00:13, 24 September 2025 (UTC)

