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==== Drive-by comments (9/20/25) ====

==== Drive-by comments (9/20/25) ====

[[User:Tokeamour]]: This article has several glaring issues.

[[User:Tokeamour]]: This article has several glaring issues.

* <s> “History”, “mathematics”, and “science” should not be capitalized.

* <s> “History”, “mathematics”, and “science” should not be capitalized.

* “High school” is not a hyphenated term.

* “High school” is not a hyphenated term.

* “Alumni” should not be capitalized.

* “Alumni” should not be capitalized.

* “Red-Tailed Hawk” should not be capitalized.

* “Red-Tailed Hawk” should not be capitalized.

* AP does not offer French Literature or German Literature.

* AP does not offer French Literature or German Literature.

* The alumni section is a mess. I strongly recommend restructuring this section into either a list format or a table format. Either one would be appropriate. [[User:Bgsu98|<span style=”color:darkorange;”>”’Bgsu98”'</span>]] [[User talk:Bgsu98|<span style=”color:darkorange;”>(Talk)</span>]] 22:29, 20 September 2025 (UTC)</s>

* The alumni section is a mess. I strongly recommend restructuring this section into either a list format or a table format. Either one would be appropriate. [[User:Bgsu98|<span style=”color:darkorange;”>”’Bgsu98”'</span>]] [[User talk:Bgsu98|<span style=”color:darkorange;”>(Talk)</span>]] 22:29, 20 September 2025 (UTC)</s>

:<s>Understood, the issues will be addressed immediately [[User:Tokeamour|Tokeamour]] ([[User talk:Tokeamour|talk]]) 22:38, 20 September 2025 (UTC)</s>

:<s>Understood, the issues will be addressed immediately [[User:Tokeamour|Tokeamour]] ([[User talk:Tokeamour|talk]]) 22:38, 20 September 2025 (UTC)</s>

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Nominator: Tokeamour (talk · contribs) 19:10, 20 September 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Bgsu98 (talk · contribs) 21:42, 20 September 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hello… I will do this review. Bgsu98 (Talk) 21:42, 20 September 2025 (UTC)[reply]

User:Tokeamour: This article has several glaring issues.

• “History”, “mathematics”, and “science” should not be capitalized.
• “High school” is not a hyphenated term.
• “Alumni” should not be capitalized.
• “Red-Tailed Hawk” should not be capitalized.
• AP does not offer French Literature or German Literature.
• The alumni section is a mess. I strongly recommend restructuring this section into either a list format or a table format. Either one would be appropriate. Bgsu98 (Talk) 22:29, 20 September 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Understood, the issues will be addressed immediately Tokeamour (talk) 22:38, 20 September 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Bgsu98 Do you mind using the format “P” (paragraph) “S” (sentence) ? so for example PS1 would be first paragraph 1st sentence. Tokeamour (talk) 22:41, 20 September 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Bgsu98 Errors fixed, please assess the format of the beginning of the list and I will continue formatting all of it, thanks. Tokeamour (talk) 23:00, 20 September 2025 (UTC)[reply]

That is better, but the names should be listed alphabetically by last name.In addition, if they are an Olympic or World Championship medalist, that can also be mentioned. For example:

Bgsu98 (Talk) 23:06, 20 September 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Bgsu98 that was an issue already and there was a maintenance tag saying use surname Tokeamour (talk) 23:09, 20 September 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I understand and totally agree though. Tokeamour (talk) 23:10, 20 September 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I like the idea you have I will do that but for the alphabetical format it might be out of the conversation as I don’t have control over it. See maintenance tag in this link as it is not present as I have done what it requested https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Cheyenne_Mountain_High_School&oldid=1309958393, again I totally understand I’m just being bold. Tokeamour (talk) 23:14, 20 September 2025 (UTC)[reply]

YNothing in that maintenance tag says anything about how to alphabetize. The standard is to alphabetize persons by last name. Bgsu98 (Talk) 23:18, 20 September 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Bgsu98 It does check source edit its invisible comment prior to my edits Tokeamour (talk) 23:25, 20 September 2025 (UTC)[reply]

You can ignore that invisible comment.Y Bgsu98 (Talk) 23:38, 20 September 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Bgsu98 Understood, thanks for getting back! Tokeamour (talk) 23:43, 20 September 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Bgsu98 Alphabetized list as required will do the same to pargraph Tokeamour (talk) 23:53, 20 September 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Bgsu98 Complete with additional request (Jeremy Abbott, 2014 Olympic bronze medalistParagraph still not done. Tokeamour (talk) 00:22, 21 September 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Y You will want to remove those skaters from the paragraph above the list. You will also want to reformat those other paragraphs into lists. Bgsu98 (Talk) 00:26, 21 September 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Bgsu98 Understood task will be done soon Tokeamour (talk) 00:31, 21 September 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Bgsu98 Please check my progress Tokeamour (talk) 01:03, 21 September 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Bgsu98 additional image inserted and will complete the next task when ready. Tokeamour (talk) 01:32, 21 September 2025 (UTC)[reply]