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”’Reviewer:”’ [[User:Simongraham|Simongraham]]&nbsp;([[User talk:Simongraham|talk]] ”’·”’ [[Special:Contributions/Simongraham|contribs]]) 23:32, 24 September 2025 (UTC)

”’Reviewer:”’ [[User:Simongraham|]]&nbsp;([[User talk:Simongraham|talk]] ”’·”’ [[Special:Contributions/Simongraham|contribs]]) 23:32, 24 September 2025 (UTC)

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This looks an interesting article and a cursory glance shows it is likely to be near to meeting the [[Wikipedia:Good article criteria|Good article criteria]] but I will start a full review shortly. [[User talk:simongraham|simongraham]] ([[User talk:simongraham|talk]]) 23:32, 24 September 2025 (UTC)

This looks an interesting article and a cursory glance shows it is likely to be near to meeting the [[Wikipedia:Good article criteria|Good article criteria]] but I will start a full review shortly. [[User talk:simongraham|simongraham]] ([[User talk:simongraham|talk]]) 23:32, 24 September 2025 (UTC)

===Comments===

*First, some general comments

*Overall, the standard of the article is high.

*It is of reasonable length, with 1,057 words of readable prose.

*The lead is short at 74 words.

*Authorship is 82.2% from the nominator with contributions from 24 other editors.

*It is currently assessed as a Start class article, but Rater predicts that it is B class or higher with a score of 87.1%.

*There are some duplicate links, including Central American tapeti and Cordillera de Talamanca.

===Criteria===

The six good article criteria:

# It is reasonable ”’well written”’.

#:the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct;{{GAList/check|}}

#:*The writing is clear and appropriate.

#:*I believe that the commas before “and resides” in the lead and “and as endangered” in the body are superfluous as the second clauses have no subject while you could introduce a comma before “and its hind feet are” and similar in other sentences were the second phrase has a subject.

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Reviewer: simongraham (talk · contribs) 23:32, 24 September 2025 (UTC)[reply]

This looks an interesting article and a cursory glance shows it is likely to be near to meeting the Good article criteria but I will start a full review shortly. simongraham (talk) 23:32, 24 September 2025 (UTC)[reply]

  • First, some general comments
  • Overall, the standard of the article is high.
  • It is of reasonable length, with 1,057 words of readable prose.
  • The lead is short at 74 words.
  • Authorship is 82.2% from the nominator with contributions from 24 other editors.
  • It is currently assessed as a Start class article, but Rater predicts that it is B class or higher with a score of 87.1%.
  • There are some duplicate links, including Central American tapeti and Cordillera de Talamanca.

Criteria

The six good article criteria:

  1. It is reasonable well written.
    the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct;

    • The writing is clear and appropriate.
    • I believe that the commas before “and resides” in the lead and “and as endangered” in the body are superfluous as the second clauses have no subject while you could introduce a comma before “and its hind feet are” and similar in other sentences were the second phrase has a subject.

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