Talk:Edward Lloyd (coffee house owner)/GA1: Difference between revisions

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Reviewer: Tim riley (talk · contribs) 20:33, 16 November 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Disclaimer: the nominator and I have collaborated on numerous articles at FAC level and elsewhere, but I am confident I can review this article disinterestedly.

Quibbles

• “Lloyd moved the coffee house to a larger premises” – do we want the indefinite article?
• “In Britain, Lloyd church warden” – missing “was a” or some such? And see below.
• “auctions also took place was the pulpit” – not English.
• “With a year of moving to the new premises” – within a year?”
• “Lloyd was a church warden” – “churchwarden” is one word according to the OED.
• “his wife Abigail died – as he had only one wife at a time Abigail probably needs a comma on either side of her name, I think, but I don’t press the point.
• “although has only been available online since 2013” – missing a word.

That’s my lot. Over to you. Tim riley talk 20:33, 16 November 2025 (UTC)[reply]