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Nominator: Royiswariii (talk · contribs) 09:30, 17 December 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 02:15, 2 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]

• “First Luv” is a song by the Filipino girl group Bini → “First Luv” is a song by the Filipino girl group Bini from their third studio album Flames (2025)
• It was released on October 2, 2025 through Star Music. → The track was released as the second single of the album on October 2, 2025 through Star Music.
• Written by Dwta → It was written by Dwta
• like “Blink Twice” and “Cherry on Top”. → remove, too much detail
• It was directed by Jason Max and LGBTQ stars Esnyr and Klarisse De Guzman, among other actors → who directed this? Different from the Music Video section. They should be mentioned as LGBTQ stars
• Mention the Accolade and one or two from the Listicles

• Why so much background about “Shagidi”? There is no need for its charts. Keep the first sentence as well as the coachela info
• Blink Twice” and “Cherry on Top” → release dates in between brackets
• They also previewed the music video through an Instagram clip featured the members arranged on a staircase in a stylized, dreamlike setting → They also previewed the music video through an Instagram clip. It featured the members arranged on a staircase in a stylized, dreamlike setting
• Third sentence needs to be merged in one of the other paragraphs
• Wikilink Start Music
• Mention it was released as the second single with source. The way it reads sounds like a bunch of standalone single

• It is two minutes and fifty-six seconds long → remove it, necessary
• written by Dwta → It was written by Dwta
• Shan → Shan Pooviriyakul
• The second half incorporates a breakbeat instrumental as Mikha and Colet sing. → source?
• The comment of the critic can be a third paragraph
• First talk about the instrumental and then the lyrics, not the other way around
• Sample needs to be in accordance with Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Music samples
• Needs meaningful description that add to the article

• from critics → from music critics + wikilink to music journalism
• Flames → year of release in between brackets
• The VP Choice Awards and same with the Listicles goes with the second sentence (see below)

• as previously seen in the song’s concept photos. → source?
• “this perhaps marks the first time that a mainstream [idol] group has unambiguously portrayed same-sex romance—particularly between two women—in an official single” → use your own words more often

• Move accolades to Reception and eliminate the box

• Move Listicles to Reception on the second paragraph and delete the box

• Move it below Music Video

• Ref 4 → Billboard Philippines should be in Italic
• Only wikilink first apparece of link, example GMA Integrated News (5, 7, 8 and 19). Only wikilink 6
• Billboard Philippines → same as previous
• Pulp → same as previous
• Apple Music is publisher