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::::So your sentence is also incorrect “Swift wrote and produced it with Aaron Dessner”. “High Infidelity” was written by Swift and Aaron Dessner, who both produced it…something in this vein? [[User:MarioSoulTruthFan|MarioSoulTruthFan]] ([[User talk:MarioSoulTruthFan|talk]]) 17:11, 6 February 2026 (UTC)

::::So your sentence is also incorrect “Swift wrote and produced it with Aaron Dessner”. “High Infidelity” was written by Swift and Aaron Dessner, who both produced it…something in this vein? [[User:MarioSoulTruthFan|MarioSoulTruthFan]] ([[User talk:MarioSoulTruthFan|talk]]) 17:11, 6 February 2026 (UTC)

:::::… how is my sentence incorrect lol. If I switch to the passive like your suggestion “High Infidelity was written and produced by Swift and Dessner” (but still, why the passive when the active voice does the job…) [[User:Ippantekina|Ippantekina]] ([[User talk:Ippantekina|talk]]) 19:19, 6 February 2026 (UTC)

:::::… how is my sentence incorrect lol. If I switch to the passive like your suggestion “High Infidelity was written and produced by Swift and Dessner” (but still, why the passive when the active voice does the job…) [[User:Ippantekina|Ippantekina]] ([[User talk:Ippantekina|talk]]) 19:19, 6 February 2026 (UTC)

::::::Because it makes it sound that only Swift wrote the song. [[User:MarioSoulTruthFan|MarioSoulTruthFan]] ([[User talk:MarioSoulTruthFan|talk]]) 20:50, 6 February 2026 (UTC)

*The engineers and everyone else involved needs to be mentioned here {{partly done}}

*The engineers and everyone else involved needs to be mentioned here {{partly done}}

*Swift’s fandom → Swift’s fans

*Swift’s fandom → Swift’s fans


Revision as of 20:50, 6 February 2026

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Nominator: Ippantekina (talk · contribs) 17:02, 6 January 2026 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 17:02, 2 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox

Lead

  • led to Swift’s fandom, the Swifties, to name it → led to Swift’s fans to name it
  • Needs to mention reviews and comparissions to other songs

 Done

Background and release

  • Retitle the section “Development and release”
The way you re-titled it also works. It is fine. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 16:46, 6 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]
  • Midnights → release date in between brackets
We need to place things within a timeline, this helps that. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 16:44, 6 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]
There’s a release date already mentioned no? Ippantekina (talk) 16:59, 6 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]
Not on the body of the article, only the lead. The latter should not be taken into consideration. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:05, 6 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]
Three hours after the standard edition of the album was released, an extended version titled the 3am Edition was surprise-released on October 21, 2022 Ippantekina (talk) 19:18, 6 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]
  • The song debuted and peaked at numbers 31 on the Billboard Global 200,[4] 33 on the US Billboard Hot 100,[5] and 28 on the Canadian Hot 100.[6] → Move it to Critical Reception and re-title it Reception
  • Live performances also don’t belong here
  • Put the Swift fan stuff here (see below)
Yes, it looks better on the new section MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 16:45, 6 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]

Production and composition

  • “High Infidelity” is 3 minutes and 51 seconds long. Swift wrote and produced it with Aaron Dessner, who played the percussion, keyboards, piano, synthesizers, and acoustic guitar.[11] The production is accompanied by blipping keyboards.[12] → “High Infidelity” wa written by Swift, who produced it with Aaron Dessner. The latter played the percussion, keyboards, piano, synthesizers, and acoustic guitar.
Why is incorrect? Just remove the length of the song. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 16:28, 6 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]
Length needs to be mentioned with source, “High Infidelity” wa written by Swift, who produced it with Aaron Dessner. is incorrect because both of them wrote the song, not just Swift. Ippantekina (talk) 17:00, 6 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]
So your sentence is also incorrect “Swift wrote and produced it with Aaron Dessner”. “High Infidelity” was written by Swift and Aaron Dessner, who both produced it…something in this vein? MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:11, 6 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]
… how is my sentence incorrect lol. If I switch to the passive like your suggestion “High Infidelity was written and produced by Swift and Dessner” (but still, why the passive when the active voice does the job…) Ippantekina (talk) 19:19, 6 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]
Because it makes it sound that only Swift wrote the song. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 20:50, 6 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]
  • The engineers and everyone else involved needs to be mentioned here Partly done
  • Swift’s fandom → Swift’s fans
  • Swift’s fandom, the Swifties, named April 29 as “High Infidelity Day” due to the lyrics mentioning the date → wrong section
  • “both the relationship and the affair are ill-fated, destined to falter in their own ways” → use your own words
  • “Renegade” and “Illicit Affairs” need release year between brackets

Critical reception

  • Retitle the section “Reception”
  • “suck up all the oxygen in the room for the time being” → use your own words more often  Not done
That’s tricky, but perhaps “Dominate the atmosphere completely”? MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:08, 6 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]
Removed it cuz it doesn’t really add value. Ippantekina (talk) 19:24, 6 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]
  • “nuanced and insightful probe into Swift’s guilt, sensitivity, and self-righteousness → same as previous  Not done
“A subtle and perceptive exploration of Swift’s feelings of guilt, her emotional sensitivity, and her tendency toward moral self-importance” – I’m sure you can come up with something more accurate MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:07, 6 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]
That’s close paraphrasing, but I did my best. Ippantekina (talk) 19:24, 6 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]

Credits and personnel

 Done

Charts

Certifications

References

  • Only wikilink once (Billboard, Rolling Stone, Business Insider and Variety)
Okay, you can address everything else MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 19:24, 4 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]

 Done

Overall

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