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Latest revision as of 02:33, 13 October 2025

I have created this Wikipedia page after learning about Petra’s stone collection from relatives travelling in Iceland, and reading extensively about this collector’s life online.

@Pythoncoder, do you have any additional recommendations on how to ensure this entry conforms to the standards of a formal bibliography on Wikipedia? I have endeavoured to write this entry from a neutral perspective, having no personal connection with the topic but a keen interest. I believe this woman is notable and deserves to have a Wikipedia entry. MountainStream888 (talk) 07:53, 8 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

The subject appears notable, and you have improved the neutrality of the prose, but there are still some phrases that feel nonneutral (“lifelong passion”, “beautiful stones”). pythoncoder (talk | contribs) 17:47, 9 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you @Pythoncoder for your feedback. I have gone back to the draft article and reviewed the writing, reducing unnecesary adjectives and further improving the neutrality in the writing. Could you please have a look and let me know if there are any other changes you would recommend? MountainStream888 (talk) 10:48, 14 September 2025 (UTC)[reply]
The draft has definitely improved since I last reviewed it. Another editor should review the draft sometime within the next couple months, and decide whether to accept it. pythoncoder (talk | contribs) 14:19, 14 September 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I’ve added a “See also” section, linking to Wikipedia section Amateur geology#Notable Rockhounds and mineral collectors, which includes the subject of this (draft) article. Misha Wolf (talk) 18:26, 14 September 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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