Talk:Tropical Storm Trami/GA1: Difference between revisions

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Nominator: HurricaneEdgar (talk · contribs) 07:34, 15 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: SnowyRiver28 (talk · contribs) 11:43, 2 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]

• The following day, Trami emerged over the coastal waters of southern Ilocos Sur, with surface observations and radar data indicating a lee-side jump had occurred with its mid-level rotation surviving into the eastern South China Sea, leaving the remnants of its circulation center over Northern Luzon; later, satellite imagery revealed a consolidating central dense overcast, indicating a well-defined circulation with deep convection located to the south. This sentence is really big, could it please be broken up. Also, I’m not sure what a lee-side jump is, and I’m not sure the average reader would either. Do you think a short explanation is necessary here? SnowyRiver28 (talk) 10:11, 4 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
• On October 26, the JTWC reported that the system I couldn’t see this abbreviation appearing earlier in the text, so I don’t know what JTWC means (it is explained later in the body, but needs to be here also). SnowyRiver28 (talk) 10:11, 4 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]

• The following day, Trami emerged over the coastal waters of southern Ilocos Sur,[1] with surface observations and radar data revealing that the storm had undergone a lee-side jump,[2] leaving the remnants of a circulation center over Northern Luzon while mid-level rotation shifted slowly westward into the eastern South China Sea;[3] later, satellite imagery showed a consolidating CDO, indicating a well-defined circulation with most of the deep convection situated to the south.[4] Another chunky sentence, please break up. SnowyRiver28 (talk) 10:11, 4 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
• There seems to be some issues with MOS:TENSE here, as the section skips between present and past tense. I think it should all be past tense, considering this event has already happened. SnowyRiver28 (talk) 10:11, 4 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]

• In the wake of the storm, the Philippines had recently been impacted by five other tropical cyclones—Typhoon Kong-rey (Leon), Typhoon Yinxing (Marce), Typhoon Toraji (Nika), Typhoon Usagi (Ofel), and Typhoon Man-yi (Pepito), which occurred in October and November.[1] Please clarify this sentence, it’s not clear if these storms occured ‘in the wake’ or before Trami. SnowyRiver28 (talk) 10:11, 4 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
• The European Union has responded approved €1.5 million (US$1.77 million) in humanitarian aid to support those most affected by Trami in the Philippines. This doesn’t make sense, and the tense is incorrect. SnowyRiver28 (talk) 10:11, 4 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]

• Source spot check completed on multiple claims and passed. Most sources are reliable government/weather/alert/report publications.
• No evident copyvio.

Beginning review. SnowyRiver28 (talk) 11:43, 2 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@HurricaneEdgar: Review Completed. Great work with this article! I found it interesting to read. Please have a look at my notes above, and please reply to each of them with {{done}} or something similar, or let me know if you have a different idea, question, or concern. I’ll place this on hold for 7 days to allow you to fix up the issues, then we should be good to go! SnowyRiver28 (talk) 10:11, 4 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]

This article has not been written in the past tense since the storm dissipated. This also needs to be addressed here, as the changes you provide will be addressed by tomorrow. HurricaneEdgar 11:49, 8 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@HurricaneEdgar No rush, but just wanted to see how you’re going with the improvements mentioned above 🙂 SnowyRiver28 (talk) 10:27, 12 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry, I’ve been busy with the Davao earthquake, so I couldn’t address that issue. I’ll try to take care of it by tomorrow. HurricaneEdgar 10:33, 12 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]