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::I feel ALT2 works, as a non-Timberlake fan it interests me enough to want to know more. I don’t personally know if the mention of sex is a problem, but I’ll go ahead and approve this (if it is an issue, I assume we’ll get a mention before it makes it to the main page). [[User:TheDoctorWho|<span style=”color:#0000ff;”>”’The”'</span><span style=”color:#0000ff”>”’Doctor”'</span><span style=”color:#0000ff;”>”’Who”'</span>]] [[User talk:TheDoctorWho|(talk)]] 04:59, 30 January 2026 (UTC) |
::I feel ALT2 works, as a non-Timberlake fan it interests me enough to want to know more. I don’t personally know if the mention of sex is a problem, but I’ll go ahead and approve this (if it is an issue, I assume we’ll get a mention before it makes it to the main page). [[User:TheDoctorWho|<span style=”color:#0000ff;”>”’The”'</span><span style=”color:#0000ff”>”’Doctor”'</span><span style=”color:#0000ff;”>”’Who”'</span>]] [[User talk:TheDoctorWho|(talk)]] 04:59, 30 January 2026 (UTC) |
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:::{{ping|RedShellMomentum}} Are you okay with ALT2? [[User:Narutolovehinata5|<B><span style=”color:#0038A8″>Naruto</span><span style=”color:#FCD116″>love</span><span style=”color:#CE1126″>hinata</span>5</B>]] ([[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|talk]] · [[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|contributions]]) 01:00, 31 January 2026 (UTC) |
:::{{ping|RedShellMomentum}} Are you okay with ALT2? [[User:Narutolovehinata5|<B><span style=”color:#0038A8″>Naruto</span><span style=”color:#FCD116″>love</span><span style=”color:#CE1126″>hinata</span>5</B>]] ([[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|talk]] · [[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|contributions]]) 01:00, 31 January 2026 (UTC) |
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Latest revision as of 01:01, 31 January 2026
Gimme What I Don’t Know (I Want)
Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.
RedShellMomentum 03:31, 20 January 2026 (UTC).
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Overall:
- @TheDoctorWho: How about “… that music critics were divided on whether Justin Timberlake‘s “Gimme What I Don’t Know (I Want)” was an effective opener for The 20/20 Experience – 2 of 2?” This is the only one I can give right now, as I have to go to bed. RedShellMomentum 04:20, 21 January 2026 (UTC)
- @RedShellMomentum: That’s better than the initial one, although I’d still proposing a few more alternatives that may appeal more to a general audience. I’m unsure if people who aren’t already fans of Timberlake would find this interesting. TheDoctorWho (talk) 03:08, 22 January 2026 (UTC)
- One possible solution is to avoid mentioning the album title by name to make it more general:
- ALT1a … that music critics were divided on whether Justin Timberlake‘s “Gimme What I Don’t Know (I Want)” was an effective album opener?
- Other possible hook angles involve the review quotes, but given how their themes, I’m not sure if they would survive WP:DYKGRAT concerns. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 03:23, 26 January 2026 (UTC)
- I like that one, but I don’t think “album” needs to be linked. RedShellMomentum 03:43, 26 January 2026 (UTC)
- @TheDoctorWho: Thoughts on the newly proposed hook? RedShellMomentum 19:05, 26 January 2026 (UTC)
- I was in the middle of replying when you just pinged me 😅. I do feel that ALT1a is much more likely to pique the interest of general audiences (it did mine)
, so approving it with that hook. Nice work! TheDoctorWho (talk) 19:07, 26 January 2026 (UTC) - @RedShellMomentum and Narutolovehinata5: Actually apologies, upon a secondary review of that hook, I unfortunately think that might be a WP:SYNTH issue? There doesn’t appear to be a direct source stating that critics were divided on it. Essentially the article is stating that because (A) one critic believed it was a proper opener and (B) another critic didn’t that (C) critics were divided (an unsourced statement). Is there a source that directly verifies this? TheDoctorWho (talk) 19:13, 26 January 2026 (UTC)
- I was in the middle of replying when you just pinged me 😅. I do feel that ALT1a is much more likely to pique the interest of general audiences (it did mine)
- One possible solution is to avoid mentioning the album title by name to make it more general:
- @RedShellMomentum: That’s better than the initial one, although I’d still proposing a few more alternatives that may appeal more to a general audience. I’m unsure if people who aren’t already fans of Timberlake would find this interesting. TheDoctorWho (talk) 03:08, 22 January 2026 (UTC)
- @TheDoctorWho: The article is lacking in other hooky material, so the only other option I can see is:
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- ALT2 … that a reviewer called a Justin Timberlake song a “clunky jungle-as-sex metaphor”?
- Given the association with sex, and it being a review quote, I’m not sure if it would meet DYKGRAT or DYKINT, but this is the best I can think of. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 03:47, 30 January 2026 (UTC)
- I feel ALT2 works, as a non-Timberlake fan it interests me enough to want to know more. I don’t personally know if the mention of sex is a problem, but I’ll go ahead and approve this (if it is an issue, I assume we’ll get a mention before it makes it to the main page). TheDoctorWho (talk) 04:59, 30 January 2026 (UTC)
- @RedShellMomentum: Are you okay with ALT2? Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 01:00, 31 January 2026 (UTC)
- I feel ALT2 works, as a non-Timberlake fan it interests me enough to want to know more. I don’t personally know if the mention of sex is a problem, but I’ll go ahead and approve this (if it is an issue, I assume we’ll get a mention before it makes it to the main page). TheDoctorWho (talk) 04:59, 30 January 2026 (UTC)

