:Hello! Thank you for your feedback re: Chip Giller’s page, and my apologies for not including the right COI information on my talk page. I’ve updated it to include Chip in addition to Agog. I made a strong effort to keep the edits to Chip’s page neutral and to improve the accuracy/sourcing and formatting – what would be the best way to preserve those changes, even without the non-profit mention? Proposing the changes on the talk page? [[User:Dhepnar|Dhepnar]] ([[User talk:Dhepnar#top|talk]]) 13:55, 28 October 2025 (UTC)
:Hello! Thank you for your feedback re: Chip Giller’s page, and my apologies for not including the right COI information on my talk page. I’ve updated it to include Chip in addition to Agog. I made a strong effort to keep the edits to Chip’s page neutral and to improve the accuracy/sourcing and formatting – what would be the best way to preserve those changes, even without the non-profit mention? Proposing the changes on the talk page? [[User:Dhepnar|Dhepnar]] ([[User talk:Dhepnar#top|talk]]) 13:55, 28 October 2025 (UTC)
::@[[User:Dhepnar|Dhepnar]], yes, you should be posting your paid edits as edit requests on the article talk page. See [[WP:EDITCOI]] for instructions on how to do this. — [[User:Asilvering|asilvering]] ([[User talk:Asilvering|talk]]) 19:35, 30 October 2025 (UTC)
::@[[User:Dhepnar|Dhepnar]], yes, you should be posting your paid edits as edit requests on the article talk page. See [[WP:EDITCOI]] for instructions on how to do this. — [[User:Asilvering|asilvering]] ([[User talk:Asilvering|talk]]) 19:35, 30 October 2025 (UTC)
== Your submission at [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|Articles for creation]]: [[Draft:Agog: The Immersive Media Institute|Agog: The Immersive Media Institute]] (November 17) ==
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Welcome!
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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Keironoshea was:
The comment the reviewer left was:
This draft appears to meet notability through coverage in reliable sources, but it currently reads with promotional tone (“eequips partners”, “pushes XR as a force for good”). Please rephrase into more neutral, encyclopaedic language. Once revised, it may be ready for acceptance.
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
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Hello, Dhepnar!
Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we’d love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Keironoshea (talk) 15:18, 9 September 2025 (UTC) |
In addition, you are required by the Wikimedia Foundation‘s terms of use to disclose your employer, client, and affiliation with respect to any contribution which forms all or part of work for which you receive, or expect to receive, compensation. See Wikipedia:Paid-contribution disclosure.
Also, editing for the purpose of advertising, publicizing, or promoting anyone or anything is not permitted. Thank you. Niafied (talk) 04:00, 24 October 2025 (UTC)
- Hello! Thank you for your feedback re: Chip Giller’s page, and my apologies for not including the right COI information on my talk page. I’ve updated it to include Chip in addition to Agog. I made a strong effort to keep the edits to Chip’s page neutral and to improve the accuracy/sourcing and formatting – what would be the best way to preserve those changes, even without the non-profit mention? Proposing the changes on the talk page? Dhepnar (talk) 13:55, 28 October 2025 (UTC)
- @Dhepnar, yes, you should be posting your paid edits as edit requests on the article talk page. See WP:EDITCOI for instructions on how to do this. — asilvering (talk) 19:35, 30 October 2025 (UTC)
Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Niafied were: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
