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::I also think the draft can be condensed substantially, you have loads of paragraphs with no citations at all. As I said in my first decline, in a biographic ”every” biographic statement needs an in-line citation. <span style=”background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;”>”'[[User:Qcne|<span style=”color: GhostWhite”>qcne</span>]]”’ <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style=”color: GhostWhite”>(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 12:07, 13 September 2025 (UTC) |
::I also think the draft can be condensed substantially, you have loads of paragraphs with no citations at all. As I said in my first decline, in a biographic ”every” biographic statement needs an in-line citation. <span style=”background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;”>”'[[User:Qcne|<span style=”color: GhostWhite”>qcne</span>]]”’ <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style=”color: GhostWhite”>(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 12:07, 13 September 2025 (UTC) |
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::Hi @[[User:Qcne|Qcne]] I sincerely understand your suggestion. You are right – one article about her summarizes her contributions in a detailed way (https://medium.com/@joorbaruah/bhupenda-was-an-inspiration-ac544070a56a). Unfortunately she does not have much media coverage as she has always been media shy and avoided any paid PR and press. But her songs are very well known all over Assam and India. I am trying to update her profile because there is a big event happening as I write where the prime minister of India is releasing a coin honoring Bhupen Hazarika (where she is also present). Also, I think if I am allowed to submit a set of photos, each photo will perhaps add a story. I will continue to work on improving the submission. Please share if you have additional thoughts or guidance. Thanks. [[User:EthosEditor|EthosEditor]] ([[User talk:EthosEditor#top|talk]]) 12:15, 13 September 2025 (UTC) |
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== Your submission at [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|Articles for creation]]: [[User:EthosEditor/sandbox|sandbox]] (September 13) == |
== Your submission at [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|Articles for creation]]: [[User:EthosEditor/sandbox|sandbox]] (September 13) == |
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Revision as of 12:15, 13 September 2025
Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Qcne were: The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
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Hello, EthosEditor!
Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we’d love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! qcne (talk) 10:19, 13 September 2025 (UTC) |
- Hi Qcne, thank you for making time to review my submission. Kavita Baruah (Rose Baruah) is an Assamese singer and younger sister of Bhupen Hazarika, the legendary cultural icon of India. I have tried to add several newspaper mentions and articles alongwith her old recordings / songs published on YourTube. I have been trying to add relevant photographs but I am being unable to do so. Please let me know how I can improve this submission to a point where you can accept it. After this is done, I will have to submit a few edits on the Bhupen Hazarika page as well. Look forward to your guidance. Thank you. EthosEditor (talk) 12:02, 13 September 2025 (UTC)
- Hi @EthosEditor.
- We really need multiple reliable journalistic sources that discuss/critique/analyse in an in-depth way Kavita Baruah and her music, specifically not based on an interview with her or her family. Most of your sources are just YouTube videos of her songs. Of your three newspaper sources only one really gives enough in-depth coverage.
- Do you have some better sources?
- I also think the draft can be condensed substantially, you have loads of paragraphs with no citations at all. As I said in my first decline, in a biographic every biographic statement needs an in-line citation. qcne (talk) 12:07, 13 September 2025 (UTC)
- Hi @Qcne I sincerely understand your suggestion. You are right – one article about her summarizes her contributions in a detailed way (https://medium.com/@joorbaruah/bhupenda-was-an-inspiration-ac544070a56a). Unfortunately she does not have much media coverage as she has always been media shy and avoided any paid PR and press. But her songs are very well known all over Assam and India. I am trying to update her profile because there is a big event happening as I write where the prime minister of India is releasing a coin honoring Bhupen Hazarika (where she is also present). Also, I think if I am allowed to submit a set of photos, each photo will perhaps add a story. I will continue to work on improving the submission. Please share if you have additional thoughts or guidance. Thanks. EthosEditor (talk) 12:15, 13 September 2025 (UTC)
Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Qcne was: The comment the reviewer left was:
No real improvement to sources or in-line citations?
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
