User:GlitchParade/Feminist political theory/GlitchParade Peer Review: Difference between revisions

I think the lead section could use a more specific description of Macaulay and give more information about what she is known for. After reading it, I feel like it just includes general information about her, instead of the most important information.

I would love for the works section to have a short sentence on what each of her works was about, I think this information would be useful. I also think that her Letters on Education then being in a separate section is confusing. I would reformat this. I had the same issue in my article about repetitive information, but I think making this all one section with more information about her other works will help the page become more clear.

I think you did a really good job of editing the section on Letters on Education and adding more information.

I also see you’ve added more about her family life which is a good catch. I would consider linking Feminist Political Thought to your page and adding information about her role as an early feminist thinker.