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Outline of proposed changes

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Now that you have compiled a bibliography, it’s time to plan out how you’ll improve your assigned article. In this section, write up a concise outline of how the sources you’ve identified will add relevant information to your chosen article. Be sure to discuss what content gap your additions tackle and how these additions will improve the article’s quality. Consider other changes you’ll make to the article, including possible deletions of irrelevant, outdated, or incorrect information, restructuring of the article to improve its readability or any other change you plan on making. This is your chance to really think about how your proposed additions will improve your chosen article and to vet your sources even further. Note: This is not a draft. This is an outline/plan where you can think about how the sources you’ve identified will fill in a content gap.

Thesis: Mossi art reflects the importance on rituals, agricultural, and societal norms in Mossi culture.

• I want to talk about multiple things but try to narrow it down to specifics
• I want to touch on a brief history about Mossi, but I’d like to focus on the artwork and the meanings and significance that ties to society
• I want a strong thesis so I can build among a good foundation

Introduction

key points

Introduce where the Mossi People are from

Secondly, get into connect the three pillars of my thesis together

Include how everything is connected through the Mossi culture

• make sure the introduction is clear, you want the reader to be interested in reading the page

topic sentences/ visual evidence

• this is the place I should focus on my sources to give me the evidence I need to support my thesis.
• each topic sentence should be able to have a different source a part of it.
• try to use all sources to have a good chunk of information apart of my page

conclusion

• Go over everything that I talked about briefly and reiterate the thesis in this portion

illustrations

make sure I have all the information on my page before adding illustrations

a good idea wood be able to use pictures from some of the books to better talk to the reader

bibliography

• make sure everything is properly cited
• I have already deleted the sources I didn’t need
• if works are needed to be added, add them to the bibliography if I don’t have enough sources