User:Khesed/Retinopathy of prematurity/Bfjulia Peer Review: Difference between revisions

Whose work are you reviewing?

Khesed

Link to draft you’re reviewing

https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/courses/Vanderbilt_University_School_of_Medicine/WikiMed_Fall_2025_(F)/students/articles/Khesed?showArticle=982088074

Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Retinopathy of prematurity

Guiding questions:

• The lead has been given additional information that clarifies medical concepts.
• The introductory sentence is more concise with such additional information.
• The lead has one citation but does not get too specific; is appropriate for laypeople.
• The lead is concise.
• I appreciate the internal links added in the lead

Guiding questions:

• Content is relevant to topic; helps clarifies topic.
• Content utilizes recent citations in 2020s
• Content helps clarifies one of the guideline tables included

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• Citations include primary and secondary literature.
• Content is accurate to sources with citations.
• Main sources (e.g., eyewiki) are thorough and secondary.
• Sources are current.
• No tertiary sources were used.
• Links work.

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• Content is easy to understand without spelling or grammatical errors while being in appropriate sections of the wikipage.

Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media

• Article includes additional screening guideline table with additional written context to help clarify

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• Content helps clarify existing wikipedia information and adds a helpful visual (e.g., screening guidelines) with context.
• Would clarify the “clinical judgement factors”–not sure what tempo refers to; I’d also move this part to AFTER the guidelines, like a “this is what screening guidelines is, XYZ, but clinicans may also do more screenings based on ABC”
• Would write out the abbreviation for PMA
• If you want, you can talk about the history/impact of the screening guidelines–how many cases are detected before and after these guidelines were instituted, how many babies are getting treatment sooner