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- The lead has been updated to reflect new content and it addresses some things. Maybe they could add some more descriptions of the articles major sections but other than that its good. Its concise.
- Content is relevant and up to date. It fills out all of the required gaps.
- The tone is very neutral and claims do not appear biased.
- The sources seem reliable and are formatted correctly. The sources feature a variety of authors and sites.
- Content is well written and reflect what the sources say. There is no errors within the newly added content.
- No images added
- Overall impressions: that newly added content is good and seems to fit within Wikipedia’s guidelines and adds new information to the page.
| Peer review
Complete your peer review exercise below, providing as much constructive criticism as possible. The more detailed suggestions you provide, the more useful it will be to your classmate. Make sure you consider each of the following aspects: LeadGuiding questions:
ContentGuiding questions:
Tone and BalanceGuiding questions:
Sources and ReferencesGuiding questions:
OrganizationGuiding questions:
Images and MediaGuiding questions: If your peer added images or media
For New Articles OnlyIf the draft you’re reviewing is for a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.
Overall impressionsGuiding questions:
Examples of good feedbackA good article evaluation can take a number of forms. The most essential things are to clearly identify the biggest shortcomings, and provide specific guidance on how the article can be improved. Additional ResourcesCheck out the Editing Wikipedia PDF for general editing tips and suggestions. |
- Whose work are you reviewing?
(provide username)
- Link to draft you’re reviewing
- Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
Evaluate the drafted changes
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(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)


