User:Odia2028/Microaggression/Asnacci Peer Review: Difference between revisions

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Whose work are you reviewing?

Odia2028

Link to draft you’re reviewing
User:Odia2028/Microaggression
Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
Microaggression

Evaluate the drafted changes

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Lead

There are no suggested edits to the lead, but I think that what is already on the page is well-rounded! Just be sure that any major changes that you make are included once you are done.

Content

On the intersectionality section, it might be helpful to add a short description of how the examples demonstrate distinct experiences that occur as a result of each relevant group membership (how the trophy wife example is not experienced by Asian men or white women, etc). You have found such great empirical studies to include in all sections; they really help demonstrate some of the under-explained claims that were already made.

Tone and Balance

The claims that you added are grounded nicely in the journal articles and studies that you have found, which make them well-balanced. Your writing is not biased in any way, but I do think that it would help someone who may be skeptical of microaggressions be convinced of their existence and prevalence.

Sources and Resources

Your sources all come from reputable authors, who also come from diverse backgrounds. They are all current and rely on other academic sources to make their claims (meta-analyses are always great!).

Organization

Your contributions are very academic and well-written, but also easily understandable for readers that may be unfamiliar with these topics.

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