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# Does “Wolverine splits with Cyclops” or “from Cyclops”? |
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# “He determines that Doctor Abraham Cornelius”. Would “he realizes that” be more appropriate? |
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# To avoid confusion, I think X23 should be switched to Laura, after the first reference to her name is made. |
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Revision as of 15:48, 25 October 2025
- Isn’t Mariko a Japanese noblewoman or something? I think a brief descriptor would help.
- Isn’t her and Logan’s engagement broken off by Mariko herself? The circumstance may not be necessary to include in their entirety, but it’s important to note if she did it or not.
- I’m pretty sure that Jubilee wasn’t created until 1989, though I have no clue when exactly she joined the X-Men or when Wolverine became her mentor. What I do know is that Jean had already been resurrected by Jubilee’s creation, so that sentence doesn’t have the proper chronological structure.
- The “He also discovers some aspects of the trauma and brainwashing he received from the Weapon X program, although his memories remain unreliable” should probably be rewritten, cause it’s confusing. Does it mean that Wolverine discover what exactly he suffered through in the Weapon X program?
- “Feral by nature, Wolverine’s mutation process will eventually cause him to degenerate physically into a more primitive, bestial state” also needs a small rewrite/clarification.
- “She is eventually enrolled at the Xavier Institute, with her true origin being kept secret as Logan’s way of protecting her”. So Logan knew she wasn’t a clone?
- Does “Wolverine splits with Cyclops” or “from Cyclops”?
- “He determines that Doctor Abraham Cornelius”. Would “he realizes that” be more appropriate?
- To avoid confusion, I think X23 should be switched to Laura, after the first reference to her name is made.
