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Hello I am a new copy editor and I would be grateful if someone could please review the first article I did this for [[Cobweb (band)]]. <span style=”background-color: Black; padding: 2px 3px 1px 3px;”>[[User:GothicGolem29|<span style=”color: Aqua”>GothicGolem29</span>]] [[User talk:GothicGolem29|<span style=”color: Lime”>(Talk)</span>]]</span> 23:37, 2 November 2025 (UTC) |
Hello I am a new copy editor and I would be grateful if someone could please review the first article I did this for [[Cobweb (band)]]. <span style=”background-color: Black; padding: 2px 3px 1px 3px;”>[[User:GothicGolem29|<span style=”color: Aqua”>GothicGolem29</span>]] [[User talk:GothicGolem29|<span style=”color: Lime”>(Talk)</span>]]</span> 23:37, 2 November 2025 (UTC) |
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:1. Remove the copyedit template from top. |
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:2. What is under ‘History’ is nothing about history but actually their career. Should be renamed. |
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:3. Sentence grammar looks good. I would suggest utilising some tables instead of the bullet lists. [[User:Kingsacrificer|Kingsacrificer]] ([[User talk:Kingsacrificer|talk]]) 19:37, 3 November 2025 (UTC) |
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Latest revision as of 19:37, 3 November 2025
Just to confirm, my rollover word count from October Blitz will not be counted for November, right? Kingsacrificer (talk) 19:05, 2 November 2025 (UTC)
- Right. It’ll count for the December blitz. Miniapolis 00:17, 3 November 2025 (UTC)
- Okay, thanks! Kingsacrificer (talk) 06:20, 3 November 2025 (UTC)
TierOne Bank seemed a particularly poorly written article. I am not sure how well I have copyedited this. If someone could give it a check, it would be much appreciated. Kingsacrificer (talk) 19:20, 2 November 2025 (UTC)
Hello I am a new copy editor and I would be grateful if someone could please review the first article I did this for Cobweb (band). GothicGolem29 (Talk) 23:37, 2 November 2025 (UTC)
- 1. Remove the copyedit template from top.
- 2. What is under ‘History’ is nothing about history but actually their career. Should be renamed.
- 3. Sentence grammar looks good. I would suggest utilising some tables instead of the bullet lists. Kingsacrificer (talk) 19:37, 3 November 2025 (UTC)

