Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/333 (Tinashe album)/archive1: Difference between revisions

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====Comments from Dentsinhere43====

====Comments from Dentsinhere43====

* A lot could be wikilinked here, e.g. [[surprise release]], [[eclecticism]], [[duck, duck, goose]], [[jungle music]], etc.

* A lot could be wikilinked here, e.g. [[surprise release]], [[eclecticism]], [[duck, duck, goose]], [[jungle music]], etc.

** Added

* [[WP:DISCOGS|Discogs]] is being used as a source here.

* [[WP:DISCOGS|Discogs]] is being used as a source here.

** While Discogs is unreliable source, it can be used as a release formats, by using {{para|via}}

* Titles in references should all follow sentence-case or title-case.

* Titles in references should all follow sentence-case or title-case.

* Use {{t|’ “}} when applicable.

* Use {{t|’ “}} when applicable.

** Done

* Some additional categories could be added, including genre categories and “albums produced by” categories.

* Some additional categories could be added, including genre categories and “albums produced by” categories.

** Done

* “Musically, 333 is a pop and R&B album that spans a variety of genres including electro-pop, house, and R&B.” Why include “musically”? Mentioning R&B twice here is redundant.

* “Musically, 333 is a pop and R&B album that spans a variety of genres including electro-pop, house, and R&B.” Why include “musically”? Mentioning R&B twice here is redundant.

** Removed

* “333 is a pop and R&B album that traverses variety of genres such as electro-pop, house and R&B” ditto

* “333 is a pop and R&B album that traverses variety of genres such as electro-pop, house and R&B” ditto

** Removed

* “During the red carpet for Billboard’s 2022 Women in Music” Substituting “red carpet” for a more common word is possible.

* “During the red carpet for Billboard’s 2022 Women in Music” Substituting “red carpet” for a more common word is possible.

* “updated her social media imagery to match” What is “social media imagery”?

* “updated her social media imagery to match” What is “social media imagery”?

** Changed to “social media images”

* “through a social-media creative challenge” The hyphen is not needed here.

* “through a social-media creative challenge” The hyphen is not needed here.

** Removed

* “of the singer ‘crouched amid peaceful scenery’, featuring three eyes.” Is a direct quote needed?

* “of the singer ‘crouched amid peaceful scenery’, featuring three eyes.” Is a direct quote needed?

** Removed

* “It said the album” Why “it”, when other sentences here use “they”?

* “It said the album” Why “it”, when other sentences here use “they”?

** Fixed

* “the pandemic year” ?

* “the pandemic year” ?

333 (Tinashe album) (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

As of 20 December 2025, 10:10 (UTC), this page is active and open for discussion. An FAC coordinator will be responsible for closing the nomination.

Nominator(s): Camilasdandelions (talk!) 22:03, 14 December 2025 (UTC)[reply]

This article is about Tinashe’s fifth studio album 333, and I believe this article, which was recently passed to GA, is ready to be FA. As I checked the article’s copyvio rate, it was little bit high, but it’s because of the Quote box that I added on the section “Title and artwork”.

 Comment:: For the FAC coordinators, see here for the GA template for how the article holds up. RedShellMomentum 22:36, 14 December 2025 (UTC)[reply]

  • A lot could be wikilinked here, e.g. surprise release, eclecticism, duck, duck, goose, jungle music, etc.
  • Discogs is being used as a source here.
    • While Discogs is unreliable source, it can be used as a release formats, by using |via=
  • Titles in references should all follow sentence-case or title-case.
  • Use {{‘ “}} when applicable.
  • Some additional categories could be added, including genre categories and “albums produced by” categories.
  • “Musically, 333 is a pop and R&B album that spans a variety of genres including electro-pop, house, and R&B.” Why include “musically”? Mentioning R&B twice here is redundant.
  • “333 is a pop and R&B album that traverses variety of genres such as electro-pop, house and R&B” ditto
  • “During the red carpet for Billboard’s 2022 Women in Music” Substituting “red carpet” for a more common word is possible.
  • “updated her social media imagery to match” What is “social media imagery”?
    • Changed to “social media images”
  • “through a social-media creative challenge” The hyphen is not needed here.
  • “of the singer ‘crouched amid peaceful scenery’, featuring three eyes.” Is a direct quote needed?
  • “It said the album” Why “it”, when other sentences here use “they”?
  • “the pandemic year” ?

That’s all I could see. – Dents (talk2me 🖂) he/him btw!!! 08:38, 20 December 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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