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[[User:David Fuchs|<span style=”color: #ad3e00;”>Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs</span>]] <sup><small>[[User talk:David Fuchs|<span style=”color: #ad3e00;”>talk</span>]]</small></sup> 18:08, 21 November 2025 (UTC)

[[User:David Fuchs|<span style=”color: #ad3e00;”>Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs</span>]] <sup><small>[[User talk:David Fuchs|<span style=”color: #ad3e00;”>talk</span>]]</small></sup> 18:08, 21 November 2025 (UTC)

:I just took a quick look at the article, and I am sorry to say that the prose also has serious problems. I fixed a dangling participle in the Lead, which also had [[MOS:OVERLINK]]ing. If anyone wants to save this star, I’d say they have a lot of work to do. Someone should compare the current version with the version that was promoted to FA. — [[User:Ssilvers|Ssilvers]] ([[User talk:Ssilvers|talk]]) 19:11, 21 November 2025 (UTC)

I just took a quick look at the article, and I am sorry to say that the prose also has serious problems. I fixed a dangling participle in the Lead, which also had [[MOS:OVERLINK]]ing. If anyone wants to save this star, I’d say they have a lot of work to do. Someone should compare the current version with the version that was promoted to FA. — [[User:Ssilvers|Ssilvers]] ([[User talk:Ssilvers|talk]]) 19:11, 21 November 2025 (UTC)


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Theatre Royal, Drury Lane (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)

As of 21 November 2025, 19:12 (UTC), this page is active and open for discussion. A FAR coordinator will advance or close this nomination when consensus is reached.

Notified: Ssilvers (largest contributor still active) [1], WikiProject Architecture [2], WikiProject Theatre [3]

I am nominating this featured article for review because of outstanding issues raised at an URFA/2020 review, namely:

  • Unclear writing and some minor organizational issues in the history section
  • Lack of coverage of the current extant building, and a paucity of information on the 20th century and present history of the theater
  • Unsourced or apparently unsourced passages throughout.

Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs talk 18:08, 21 November 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Remove star. I just took a quick look at the article, and I am sorry to say that the prose also has serious problems. I fixed a dangling participle in the Lead, which also had MOS:OVERLINKing. If anyone wants to save this star, I’d say they have a lot of work to do. Someone should compare the current version with the version that was promoted to FA. — Ssilvers (talk) 19:11, 21 November 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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