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Shall review. [[User:Arconning|Arconning]] ([[User talk:Arconning|talk]]) 14:27, 10 January 2026 (UTC) |
Shall review. [[User:Arconning|Arconning]] ([[User talk:Arconning|talk]]) 14:27, 10 January 2026 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Vrxces|Vrxces]] Here’ll be my comments. [[User:Arconning|Arconning]] ([[User talk:Arconning|talk]]) 15:18, 24 January 2026 (UTC) |
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===Prose and MoS=== |
===Prose and MoS=== |
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Latest revision as of 15:18, 24 January 2026
Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch
Nominator: Vrxces (talk · contribs) 04:53, 5 January 2026 (UTC)
Reviewer: Arconning (talk · contribs) 14:27, 10 January 2026 (UTC)
Shall review. Arconning (talk) 14:27, 10 January 2026 (UTC)
- @Vrxces Here’ll be my comments. Arconning (talk) 15:18, 24 January 2026 (UTC)
- “A sequel of Silver”, “A sequel to Silver”
- “defeating a bosses”?
- “Combat is in real-time, although players can pause during battle.”, could add “is done in real-time”
Development and release
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- “Development of Silver commenced from 1995”, “Development of Silver commenced in 1995”
- Wikilink first mention of “turn-based” outside of the lead section.
- Excess commas in “including the 1998 European Computer Trade Show,[17],”
- “under intellectual property of Atari,”, ” under the intellectual property of Atari,”
- “Final Fantasy killer”, unnecessary wikilinks used in the reviews section as they are mentioned beforehand in the body.
- “remarking the gesture-based controls”, “remarking that the gesture-based controls”
- All images used in the article are properly licensed and are relevant to the article. All good here.
- Earwig seems to check out.
- No ongoing edit war, broad enough information, neutral.
