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* “{{xt|while the second contains several unreleased demos and live tracks and is titled…}}” is wordy and should be tightened for clarity. |
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* {{xt|It charted at number 3 Rock & Metal Albums chart}} is missing “on the”. |
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* The lead says, “demos and live tracks”, but the section describes demos only. Either remove “and live tracks” from the lead or add information about it having live tracks to the section. |
* The lead says, “demos and live tracks”, but the section describes demos only. Either remove “and live tracks” from the lead or add information about it having live tracks to the section. |
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** I honestly dunno why I wrote it that way because the demos ”are” the live tracks (live demos)… fixed. |
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Latest revision as of 05:26, 3 January 2026
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Nominator: NegativeMP1 (talk · contribs) 03:52, 29 May 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: RedShellMomentum (talk · contribs) 02:07, 3 January 2026 (UTC)
Shall review. Expect more comments later as I’m focusing on Everything I Thought It Was. RedShellMomentum 02:07, 3 January 2026 (UTC)
- Thanks for taking this up! In the lead-up to your other comments, I’ve addressed everything source formatting wise I think except for the archiving of each reference. WP:IABOT has what feels like an eternal queue and I tried to submit a request only for it to not go through. I’ll hopefully resolve that eventually… will do them manually if I have to as well. λ NegativeMP1 03:18, 3 January 2026 (UTC)
- “while the second contains several unreleased demos and live tracks and is titled…” is wordy and should be tightened for clarity.
More soon.
Background and release
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- It charted at number 3 Rock & Metal Albums chart is missing “on the”.
More soon.
- The lead says, “demos and live tracks”, but the section describes demos only. Either remove “and live tracks” from the lead or add information about it having live tracks to the section.
- I honestly dunno why I wrote it that way because the demos are the live tracks (live demos)… fixed.
More soon.
Great!
Great!
Great!
Great!
- Link Rolling Stone in ref 1.
- Author information and date is missing for ref 2. Also use {{cite magazine}} since NME is a magazine.
- Ref 3 is dead.
- For ref 5, EW.com → Entertainment Weekly. Also use {{cite magazine}} since it’s a magazine.
- Ref 6 should use {{cite web}}.
- For ref 11, Stephen Thomas Erlewine → Erlewine, Stephen Thomas. Also use
|publisher=instead of|website=. - Ref 12 should use {{cite magazine}}.
- Ref 13 should also use {{cite magazine}}. Also add
|access-date=for it. - Add archives for the unarchived refs to prevent link rot.
- I’ve queued up a WP:IABOT archival job for the page. No idea how long that’ll take.
