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== Adventures in rainbow country == |
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Looking at [[Hinterland energy in Guyana|this]], let me say the sourcing is excellent. I do have a problem with the tables. I don’t see a need for tabular mention (or any mention) of every single pump, light, & school served. I’m also not thrilled about the table of involved parties. (That may be more style than substance, however.) Also, the lead is way too short. You want to establish some of the history, objectives, & outcomes, so somebody knowing nothing doen’t have to read the entire page to know what’s what. Otherwise, IMO, a very nice bit of work. [[User:Trekphiler|< |
Looking at [[Hinterland energy in Guyana|this]], let me say the sourcing is excellent. I do have a problem with the tables. I don’t see a need for tabular mention (or any mention) of every single pump, light, & school served. I’m also not thrilled about the table of involved parties. (That may be more style than substance, however.) Also, the lead is way too short. You want to establish some of the history, objectives, & outcomes, so somebody knowing nothing doen’t have to read the entire page to know what’s what. Otherwise, IMO, a very nice bit of work. [[User:Trekphiler|< =”#3F00FF”><small>TREKphiler</small></>]] [[User talk:Trekphiler|< =”#C90016″>any time you’re ready, Uhura</small> </sup>]] 22:29 & 22:31, 23 July 2011 (UTC) |
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Looking at this, let me say the sourcing is excellent. I do have a problem with the tables. I don’t see a need for tabular mention (or any mention) of every single pump, light, & school served. I’m also not thrilled about the table of involved parties. (That may be more style than substance, however.) Also, the lead is way too short. You want to establish some of the history, objectives, & outcomes, so somebody knowing nothing doen’t have to read the entire page to know what’s what. Otherwise, IMO, a very nice bit of work. TREKphiler any time you’re ready, Uhura 22:29 & 22:31, 23 July 2011 (UTC)
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