I reviewed Jaden.tang17’s sandbox, bibliography, and his contributions, and these are my thoughts:
Overall, you did a really nice job explaining what TMP is and how it fits into DNA synthesis. The layout is clean, and the main ideas are easy to follow. I had a few suggestions that might help strengthen it even more.
Lead Section
I think some sentences need to be added in the Lead to connect it to your contributions. This way, I feel it’ll make it flow better.
Content
Your explanation of the salvage and de novo pathways is really clear. Adding a short description of TMP’s chemical structure and a bit of clinical context for how dTMP is made could give additional background. It seems a bit technical, which makes it hard for everyone to understand, so I think some sentences need to be simplified. Also, adding some wikilinks to some words would be helpful for users to understand them more. Other than that, the content is pretty solid.
Tone and Balance, Sources – The tone is overall neutral, non-biased, and balanced. Sources are overall good too.
Final Thoughts
Overall, you did a great job.
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Peer review
Complete your peer review exercise below, providing as much constructive criticism as possible. The more detailed suggestions you provide, the more useful it will be to your classmate. Make sure you consider each of the following aspects:
Lead
Guiding questions:
- Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer?
- Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article’s topic?
- Does the Lead include a brief description of the article’s major sections?
- Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?
- Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?
Content
Guiding questions:
- Is the content added relevant to the topic?
- Is the content added up-to-date?
- Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?
- Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia’s equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics?
Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:
- Is the content added neutral?
- Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
- Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
- Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?
Sources and References
Guiding questions:
- Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?
- Does the content accurately reflect what the cited sources say? (You’ll need to refer to the sources to check this.)
- Are the sources thorough – i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?
- Are the sources current?
- Are the sources written by a diverse spectrum of authors? Do they include historically marginalized individuals where possible?
- Are there better sources available, such as peer-reviewed articles in place of news coverage or random websites? (You may need to do some digging to answer this.)
- Check a few links. Do they work?
Organization
Guiding questions:
- Is the content added well-written – i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?
- Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors?
- Is the content added well-organized – i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media
- Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
- Are images well-captioned?
- Do all images adhere to Wikipedia’s copyright regulations?
- Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?
For New Articles Only
If the draft you’re reviewing is for a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.
- Does the article meet Wikipedia’s Notability requirements – i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
- How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
- Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles – i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
- Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?
Overall impressions
Guiding questions:
- Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article – i.e. Is the article more complete?
- What are the strengths of the content added?
- How can the content added be improved?
Examples of good feedback
A good article evaluation can take a number of forms. The most essential things are to clearly identify the biggest shortcomings, and provide specific guidance on how the article can be improved.
Additional Resources
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- Whose work are you reviewing?
(provide username)
- Link to draft you’re reviewing
- Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
Evaluate the drafted changes
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(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)
