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Well honestly it looks like you wrote the majority of the article. I would work on your sourcing and try to find more evidence, right now it looks like you’ve added 4 sources, try to add 2 more. expand on the background section and try to source more of that information, there is only one sentence in that entire section that is properly sourced. I would also suggest adding a picture of Corbett O’Toole if you can find one. |
Well honestly it looks like you wrote the majority of the article. I would work on your sourcing and try to find more evidence, right now it looks like you’ve added 4 sources, try to add 2 more. expand on the background section and try to source more of that information, there is only one sentence in that entire section that is properly sourced. I would also suggest adding a picture of Corbett O’Toole if you can find one. |
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Latest revision as of 18:03, 5 November 2025
- Whose work are you reviewing?
(Kkehola)
- Link to draft you’re reviewing
- User:Kkehola/National Disabled Women’s Educational Equity Project/Outline
- Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
- National Disabled Women’s Educational Equity Project
Evaluate the drafted changes
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Well honestly it looks like you wrote the majority of the article. I would work on your sourcing and try to find more evidence, right now it looks like you’ve added 4 sources, try to add 2 more. expand on the background section and try to source more of that information, there is only one sentence in that entire section that is properly sourced. I would also suggest adding a picture of Corbett O’Toole if you can find one. I think overall you’ve added a lot and done well. Just do a bit more legwork to fill out the article
