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:Reference spot-check: [https://data.clarionledger.com/tornado-archive/mississippi/224551/ 6] [https://mesonet.agron.iastate.edu/vtec/?wfo=KJAN&phenomena=TO&significance=W&eventid=21&year=2010 12] [https://cdispatch.com/news/a-look-at-the-victims-killed-by-a-miss-tornado/ 26] [https://mesonet.agron.iastate.edu/wx/afos/p.php?pil=PNSJAN&e=201004252035 34] [https://www.claimsjournal.com/news/southeast/2010/04/28/109348.htm 45] [https://www.claimsjournal.com/news/southcentral/2010/04/26/109277.htm 50] [https://www.wlbt.com/story/12391568/builders-try-to-beat-next-round-of-weather-in-yazoo-county 62] [https://redcrosschat.org/2010/04/24/disaster-alert-tornado-in-yazoo-city/ 65] [https://www.baptistpress.com/resource-library/news/community-flattened-yet-faith-fanned/ 73] [https://picayuneitem.com/2010/07/most-debris-cleared-3-months-after-miss-tornado/ 75]

:Reference spot-check: [https://data.clarionledger.com/tornado-archive/mississippi/224551/ 6] [https://mesonet.agron.iastate.edu/vtec/?wfo=KJAN&phenomena=TO&significance=W&eventid=21&year=2010 12] [https://cdispatch.com/news/a-look-at-the-victims-killed-by-a-miss-tornado/ 26] [https://mesonet.agron.iastate.edu/wx/afos/p.php?pil=PNSJAN&e=201004252035 34] [https://www.claimsjournal.com/news/southeast/2010/04/28/109348.htm 45] [https://www.claimsjournal.com/news/southcentral/2010/04/26/109277.htm 50] [https://www.wlbt.com/story/12391568/builders-try-to-beat-next-round-of-weather-in-yazoo-county 62] [https://redcrosschat.org/2010/04/24/disaster-alert-tornado-in-yazoo-city/ 65] [https://www.baptistpress.com/resource-library/news/community-flattened-yet-faith-fanned/ 73] [https://picayuneitem.com/2010/07/most-debris-cleared-3-months-after-miss-tornado/ 75]

:12 does not verify the time of 11.47pm from what I can see. ”'[[User:Mb2437|<span style=”background:#19543E; border:2px solid #19543E; color:white; padding:2px;”>MB</span>]][[User talk:Mb2437|<span style=”background:white; border:2px solid #19543E; color:#19543E; padding:2px;”>2437</span>]]”’ 16:36, 29 January 2026 (UTC)

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:65 is a broken link and should be tagged as {{code|dead}}. ”'[[User:Mb2437|<span style=”background:#19543E; border:2px solid #19543E; color:white; padding:2px;”>MB</span>]][[User talk:Mb2437|<span style=”background:white; border:2px solid #19543E; color:#19543E; padding:2px;”>2437</span>]]”’ 16:36, 29 January 2026 (UTC)

:All the rest pass. ”'[[User:Mb2437|<span style=”background:#19543E; border:2px solid #19543E; color:white; padding:2px;”>MB</span>]][[User talk:Mb2437|<span style=”background:white; border:2px solid #19543E; color:#19543E; padding:2px;”>2437</span>]]”’ 16:36, 29 January 2026 (UTC)


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Reference spot-check: [ 1] [ 2] [ 3] [ 4] [ 5] [ 6] [ 7] [ 8] [ 9] [ 10]

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  3. Broad in its coverage:
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  4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.
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Quite a few instances of hyphens used in place of en dashes for ranges, such as 1500-2500 j/kg. MB2437 13:32, 29 January 2026 (UTC)
In total, The tornado; capitalisation. MB2437 13:42, 29 January 2026 (UTC)
with owner of a local construction company, Parker’s Builders, reporting that should refer to Paul Parker, not his company, and it should be the owner. MB2437 14:23, 29 January 2026 (UTC)
There are 7 citations in the lead that should be moved if possible. MB2437 13:55, 29 January 2026 (UTC)
It resulted in ten fatalities, should be “10” per MOS:NUMNOTES. MB2437 13:55, 29 January 2026 (UTC)
up to mid-60s/low-70s, a pool house/storage shed; the slashes should be avoided. MB2437 13:55, 29 January 2026 (UTC)
The quote box should not be used for the list of fatalities. MB2437 13:55, 29 January 2026 (UTC)
For § Warning history, I would un-collapse the table and remove the float value. MB2437 13:55, 29 January 2026 (UTC)
Alt text should not state the facts surrounding the photograph, simply explain it or refer to the caption. They are not captions, which those who are using a screen-reader can already read. MB2437 13:55, 29 January 2026 (UTC)
Values in bar should offer a psi conversion. Millibars should be abbreviated as “mbar”. MB2437 13:57, 29 January 2026 (UTC)
There are multiple instances of the fourth wall being broken in footnotes. MB2437 14:04, 29 January 2026 (UTC)
Timezone repetition.
One instance of a footnote before punctuation. MB2437 13:59, 29 January 2026 (UTC)
Citation 75 has the author name “Report” and 61 has “JFP Staff”. MB2437 14:14, 29 January 2026 (UTC)
Reference spot-check: 6 12 26 34 45 50 62 65 73 75
12 does not verify the time of 11.47pm from what I can see. MB2437 16:36, 29 January 2026 (UTC)
65 is a broken link and should be tagged as dead. MB2437 16:36, 29 January 2026 (UTC)
All the rest pass. MB2437 16:36, 29 January 2026 (UTC)

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