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==Outline of proposed changes== |
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”’Improved the characters”’ |
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Add The roles of the character and what purpose they served to the play |
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* added more details about the main characters. Strepsaides, Pheidippides, Socrates, and The cloud |
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Added to the plot Character focused clarification |
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* Explained each characters personality and roles in the play in a simple and clear way |
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* Showed how the character changed through out the story and how they reflect the plot |
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* Connected characters actions to the theme of the play |
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”’Expanding the Plot section”’ |
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Thematic explanations, Explains how plot events related to the play |
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* I rewrote and expanded parts of the plot events are easier to follow |
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Expanded on the further reading section for more information on the play |
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* Explained why Strepsides wants his son to join the Thinkery and how that leas to the mean conflict. |
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* Added clearer transitions between the different parts of the story |
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Latest revision as of 04:30, 12 December 2025
Outline of proposed changes
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Improved the characters
- added more details about the main characters. Strepsaides, Pheidippides, Socrates, and The cloud
- Explained each characters personality and roles in the play in a simple and clear way
- Showed how the character changed through out the story and how they reflect the plot
- Connected characters actions to the theme of the play
Expanding the Plot section
- I rewrote and expanded parts of the plot events are easier to follow
- Explained why Strepsides wants his son to join the Thinkery and how that leas to the mean conflict.
- Added clearer transitions between the different parts of the story
Adding external link
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Now that you have compiled a bibliography, it’s time to plan out how you’ll improve your assigned article.
In this section, write up a concise outline of how the sources you’ve identified will add relevant information to your chosen article. Be sure to discuss what content gap your additions tackle and how these additions will improve the article’s quality. Consider other changes you’ll make to the article, including possible deletions of irrelevant, outdated, or incorrect information, restructuring of the article to improve its readability or any other change you plan on making. This is your chance to really think about how your proposed additions will improve your chosen article and to vet your sources even further. Note: This is not a draft. This is an outline/plan where you can think about how the sources you’ve identified will fill in a content gap. |
