User:Profesorapos/Laida Memba Ikuga/Skemelgor12 Peer Review: Difference between revisions

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Latest revision as of 17:46, 28 October 2025

Whose work are you reviewing?

Mwbullock

Link to draft you’re reviewing
User:Profesorapos/Laida Memba Ikuga/Outline
Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

No Sandbox Draft, Only an Outline

Evaluate the drafted changes

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After going through the outline of this person, from what I can see and review I think you have a lot of good sources and information that you are trying to pull. I like where your thoughts are as far as organization in your outline. It seems your person has a lot of different publicity and more attention, so I think pulling those different aspects will serve the page well. I think that the sources and division of accolades will be valuable to readers in understanding her journey. You meet the source requirements and seem to have a good understanding of each one as far as how it relates to her life and story. I think something I would be cautious about is including something that has lower significance and less information. Since you want to dive into various aspects of her life, maybe going broader could be better, just to ensure ample coverage of each section. I don’t know if you have media decided yet but just calling attention to her or her work with that media will serve a key purpose in a visual aid for readers. Overall, I believe you have a good start at identifying her key accomplishments and work that will be purposeful in discussion.

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