User:Cooper Frye/Ctesibius/Ir1010 Peer Review: Difference between revisions

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Latest revision as of 08:07, 12 December 2025

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Cooperfrye

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Ctesibius
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See to have detailed the bibliography a bit compared to the previous notion of the part of the page. As well as expanding the understanding of what Ctesibius means and giving background knowledge of what Ctesibius is, setting like a little introduction page for the page before getting into the invention itself and talking about the inventor Ctesibius. I think they did well in adding an introduction since without having a relative understanding on the inventor how can you describe his works.

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