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| Peer review
Complete your peer review exercise below, providing as much constructive criticism as possible. The more detailed suggestions you provide, the more useful it will be to your classmate. Make sure you consider each of the following aspects: LeadGuiding questions:
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- Whose work are you reviewing?
(provide username)
Cooperfrye
- Link to draft you’re reviewing
- Ctesibius
- Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
Evaluate the drafted changes
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(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)
See to have detailed the bibliography a bit compared to the previous notion of the part of the page. As well as expanding the understanding of what Ctesibius means and giving background knowledge of what Ctesibius is, setting like a little introduction page for the page before getting into the invention itself and talking about the inventor Ctesibius. I think they did well in adding an introduction since without having a relative understanding on the inventor how can you describe his works.
